Salt and Acid

August 6th, 2011, 5:42 pm

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2die on August 6th, 2011, 5:45 pm

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No. not really.

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otakulys on August 6th, 2011, 6:51 pm

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Wow, this is beautiful. I can't wait to see more of it.

Chingu on August 7th, 2011, 3:30 am

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OMG. The... sadness... I CAN .. omg.. emotions. overpouring... So sad.

I love how you emphasize the presence of rain here. It really adds to the gloomy mood you're going for. :3

TheFool813 on October 1st, 2011, 9:47 pm

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Beautiful and heart wrenching. I adore how ypur story, even though its still in the beginning, is already able to reach out and move the reader.